TheRustyCutlass

Hello,

As I replied to Radox12's blog post, I'm reasonable at English, or rather tackling things one paragraph at a time. I have a feeeling a lot of us could be the same. Perhaps we could write a story together? I mean a propper story; good themes, a decent plot, a couple major characters. Something that a student could use if they need to, and I don't see if it's a problem so long as you contributed Smile

I'm sort of floating around, on and off the forums, so I hope to see this full of great ideas when I get back!

Now remember this has to be suitable if anyone wishes to use it for school, so lets keep it reasonable and less sexual. I'm looking at you, http://therustycutlass.com/forums/Thread...hort-Story

PLANNING:

All I'm going to suggest is that we have at least 2 major characters, male and female so they may have a romance dynamic if anyone can contribute a section for that.

It was the year 2063. I woke up in my tent and looked at my wife laying next to me. I put on some pants and stepped outside. Not to my surprise, there were 10 of them. What could only be described as zombies. Some called them Walkers, but to me, they were just braindead zombies. I stepped back into the tent and wake up my wife.
"Anita. Anita!" I whispered, holding her by the shoulders and shaking.
She woke sluggishly.
"We have to go." I say,. "Pack up the supplies."
She looks at me, dazed, but soon comes to her senses and gets dressed. It was cold in Massachusetts, but we had to go, and had almost no time to get ready.

The zombies marched forward from nearby trees in their zombie-like fashion. I knew they were too close to us. We had to leave.

"Sweety, grab only what you need. We NEED to leave"

We left a bag behind. Clothes. At least it wasn't anything too important, we had what we are wearing. We will survive.

This got really gay really quick.
Did you read me say PLANNING!?
I was expecting ideas, not a half cocked start to a story with a shitty overused theme.

AlphaNegro

Radox12

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AlphaNegro